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Aenalemma

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February 15, 2014
From the suggester: Strong imagery, well-crafted line breaks, lovely rhythm and sounds—Aenalemma by ThyPoetSorcerer is unilaterally well done.
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I held on to our skin on skin scent
                   
until it became ionized nitrogen,
until it drifted over dystopian summers
and blue-haloed as a cobalt-sulfate atmosphere

—which I followed well above the continental shelf
     while coiling in tandem with the world’s rotation.

And only then, in starward dead-reckonings,
I could measure the ghost taction of your body

—far as polar-aurorae shieldings
ebbing away from directional dawn light,
                                         
or so I portended distance, a desperate force, desultory;

how I misread it, the mercurial sleeper—
intentionally left blank, all hushed decoherence,
                               all molecular compression.
             
Come home darling.
   
The lanterns on the wharf have been out for too long,
           row after row, fists turned to stone,  
                        clutching at moonburned cinders,
                  lesser sundials beginning to fracture.
Aenalemma: Is a curve representing the changing angular offset of a celestial body (usually the Sun) from its mean position on the celestial sphere as viewed from another celestial body (usually the Earth).
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inspired by intricately-ordinary's gorgeous piece: as numerous as the stars under your skin

and Anekdoten's "Monolith", track 1 from their album Gravity.
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jojo22's avatar
I've got a thing about the aenalemma, researched it quite a bit.  Kinda fascinates me that it is roughly the same shape as the infinity symbol.  Wondering if there is a connection.  Something about the shape of the aenalemma calls deep into my psyche, suggesting it is an important system not just in relation to our earth and the sun, but to the general nature of the universe.